Whoa, wow! So many words, Oil of Olay! My bag is fashion, not advertising, so maybe I don't know what I'm talking about here, but instead of this Great Wall of Text, I'm thinking maybe you could trim down the ad copy a bit on this? Say, something like:
Boom. Done. Probably wouldn't kill you to throw in a photo of the damn product, too.
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